It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. N Eddy's big picture show . NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. Even Ronnie Anne was there too. They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. And after that, the whole room was silent. In order for him to not have "bad luck", his sisters forced him to wear a squirrel suit from Lynn's baseball game. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. Everyone finally realized that what they've done. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. She smiled as Lincoln took it. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Except for Lynn). More information No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane More like this House Cartoon Cartoon Fan Cartoon Shows They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. Goodbye for now. (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. You were fine with me sleeping outside and being locked outside? 5 months of research ruined. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. ENOUGH!!! This is a family moment. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. I MESSED UP!!! I heard you scream! Just a heads up, this ending is going to feature a lot of yelling from the siblings and behavior/actions that some of you may believe that I'm representing the siblings in a bad light. Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! SQUIRRELS WIN! We wont! Rita: Honey, please. We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? No such luck alt ending5. No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) - The Loud House Encyclopedia (Lynn looks confused.) Start talking. And Lori and Lisa. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. And you better start talking now!". *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. My team needs that! Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. I'm not bad luck. Dont threaten your little sister! I'll never be able to play games the best way again! I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! Whats next? He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). Lucy: Lincoln's right! How can I help you?" You overreact to everything! Whenever you fell like you need a break, you're free to take a rain check. NO!" "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). Especially Lynn. LYNN LOUD HITS A GRAND SLAM!!! Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. Hahahaha! No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. We are no longer grounded to the room. I didn't think you guys would believe I was bad luck, even going as far as to lock me out. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! No Such Luck (Alternate Ending) by Alexh4070 on DeviantArt Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." ), (It cuts to the main street. "Aunt Ruth, please reconsider," Rita started with, before she interrupted by Ruth. I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. ", (Lynn starts running towards him. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! YOU HATE US!!! Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! Sweaty Pants here! (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. Lincoln: That's what i always say. He really doesn't like us at all does he? DeviantArt Protect. You can never come back. Needless to say, they were not pleased. I'll keep it between the both of us. Lola added, shouting. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. Things were destroyed or damaged and they saw some people getting tended to for bruises. Lynn Sr. asked. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. Lori yelled. ", Lincoln: (to Lola) "Lola, all those pageants I went to, did anything bad happen those times? WE WENT TOO FAR!!! Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. This proves it. Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" SQUIRRELS WIN!" The worst part is, they had no argument against this. Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. She whistles for Fangs. Lincoln: Lana. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. I do not own the Loud . Post an update . They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. Just so you know, in case you ask about that). "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? Spell it out alt ending7. At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. What seems to be the problem?" I already told you, I live here. Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) ", Lori: "Oh Lincoln, if you don't feel like attending our events all the time, we're not forcing you to go. Lola: Hey, Lincoln! Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! "Well mom, you know what I think?" ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. What kind of family would do this to one of their own? ", (and that did it. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. I feel like a fool! He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. All of you!" Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. The woman groaned and responded with, "It's not so much the dip that got them in trouble, rather it was their lack of swimwear that did." ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . "SAVE IT, RITA!" It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. Even you Lisa! And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. Lincoln turned to Lori and said, "I think we should call Aunt Ruth and tell her how we feel." He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] "Listen to what?" Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! *, Lincoln: It's not fair. Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. Loud House Alt endings Chapter 1: Butterfly effect alt ending, a loud ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? Now we've broken the shower." Thats what my problem is! Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. Give it back! "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." Lincoln: Okay. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! Kick the . Post-Story Notice: Anyway. tears began to fall out their eyes. Lincoln: I said NO! Literature. "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" This response shocked Lynn Sr. and Rita, Aunt Ruth was someone they could rely in case they went out of town and couldn't trust their kids to be home alone, hearing her say she doesn't want them anywhere near her home made them very worried. Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. I only own this fanfiction story, which is rated K+, so enjoy. Luna put. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. showing a flashback of the episode No Such Luck. Lola yelled. Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! I even threatened you to go to my game! Ruthless People extended ending13. (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? You tricked us in the first place. Lincoln: (tearful) No! Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). How convenient for me. ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" Post a journal. Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. Lola: How could he?! Let me tell you this! Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! They were my favourite! I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. Now, let me make this clear! TLH: Scoop Snoop (Alternate Ending) by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt Lincoln: Alright, i admit! ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. Lincoln: Girls! Not a loud alt ending6. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) "What," Felix said, "what is it?" What do you think, Pep? Lana: *Gasp* All my pets are now homeless! "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. You can't ground us, we're the parents!" Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. Lincoln and the parents come up.]. Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. Lincoln: I said NO! [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! The family sees this and gasps in shock.). Lincoln: No! except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. A very, and I'm talking VERY, controversial episode of The Loud House. "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. Maybe I should just quit the team. I hate presentations! I hate this stupid beach! Taking the device out of the girl's hand. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" That's not how it works in the hotel. YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! I don't need anyone! I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. I was horrible to you! Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. Lori said. Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" (Cries) All my precious tiaras. While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. It's my first ever one shot I've done. Lynn: HUH!?!?! They got their answer when, suddenly, the door the spa was kicked open by someone's shoe. Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. Not. Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! You're all delusional and irresponsible all the time and I HATE that! WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! At least this thick skin won't let me down! (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. "Her pudding is at least a hundred years old and will cause us all to go to the hospital for stomach pumping," Lisa added. We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! User blog:AlexKawa/Alternative Ending: No Such Luck | The Loud House I need to get out of here! (cries). Completed I hate concerts! "Which room number is it?" Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. She hugged him back.] Rushing to the balcony door, he opened it, getting the girl's attention. I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. I would feel awful if you did. Honey, we're back. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? ", Luan: "The same goes for all of us. Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! Then, he opened it up. Right now." Nosuchluck Stories - Wattpad "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. (Raises his fist at her). The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' We said we were sorry. Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! the loud house no such luck alternate ending deviantart ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. No Such Luck/Frog Wild Episode aired Mar 14, 2017 TV-Y7 22 m IMDb RATING 5.1 /10 218 YOUR RATING Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln is rejected by his sisters because he is "bad luck"; Lincoln and Lana protect the frogs from being dissected. Fade to the sisters all waking up from their nightmares. SEE YOU NEVER!" We know you are!". Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! QUIET! (yet another author interruption: the three obnoxious guys' characters are based on some of the staff that are/were working on the show at the time this episode first premiered, which is what the show did when they made this episode canon, I kept their first names but gave them new last names. While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. divine001 on Tumblr Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. Anyway, enjoy. Trying explaining that!" ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Especially Miss. Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! News flash; I live here!". Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). Status Update. "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. Lucy. The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. Theres no need to shout. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. Tell the community what's on your mind. And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. Lincoln: AND I NEVER, EVER WANT TO SEE YOU UNLUCKY PARASITES IN MY LIFE AGAIN!!! Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. So expect a bill in the mail." (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. They are looking very heartbroken.). "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. "The Loud House" No Such Luck/Frog Wild (TV Episode 2017) - IMDb You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? Lincoln: So where did this looney belief that i was bad luck suddenly come from, huh!? No more Loud Family? And it wasn't just her, everyone in the lobby felt it and they looked around, wondering if there was an unexplainable earthquake coming. Anyway, here's my fanfiction.